by Stephanie Silvia
Black and white cows
stand knee deep in mud
next to egrets
Black and white cows
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if compression is the first grace of style
by Stephanie Silvia
Black and white cows
stand knee deep in mud
next to egrets
Previous post: Summer Mountain Rain
Next post: Summer Haiku, June 21, 2012
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Stephanie,
I “got” image and feeling, so, for me, good haiku, thought some haiku purists might complain, “Yes, but it reads as one sentence.” Whether you meant it as haiku or not, it is a true poem and you are a true poet. Thank you for sending us this gift.
Amicus poeticae,
Neal Whitman