Comments for Getting Something Read http://shortpoem.org Short Works for the Peripatetic Web Surfer Thu, 03 Jul 2008 22:26:36 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 Comment on Acrostic Ballad of the Sleeping Gypsy by Danny http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/sleeping-gypsy/#comment-74 Danny Wed, 18 Jun 2008 11:43:29 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=165#comment-74 this is bloody fantastic. it brings a tear to my eyes and a tear to my trousers this is bloody fantastic.
it brings a tear to my eyes and a tear to my trousers

]]> Comment on Jeolmul Forest on Je Ju Island by Di http://shortpoem.org/2008/06/jeolmul-forest/#comment-72 Di Thu, 12 Jun 2008 17:08:05 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=174#comment-72 Proud, proud, proud. To find solace in clear, quiet nights, fireflies, earthy things and tomato plants IS to find god. Proud, proud, proud.

To find solace in clear, quiet nights, fireflies, earthy things and tomato plants IS to find god.

]]> Comment on I Am the Water by Darla Himeles http://shortpoem.org/2008/06/i-am-the-water/#comment-70 Darla Himeles Sun, 08 Jun 2008 15:25:48 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=171#comment-70 Thanks! Thanks!

]]> Comment on I Am the Water by lissa http://shortpoem.org/2008/06/i-am-the-water/#comment-69 lissa Sun, 08 Jun 2008 14:51:34 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=171#comment-69 love that last stanza. love that last stanza.

]]> Comment on Faith by lissa http://shortpoem.org/2008/06/faith/#comment-68 lissa Tue, 03 Jun 2008 17:41:52 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=169#comment-68 lovely, powerful piece. my favorite parts were "a roadmap of burst blood vessels and sadness" and "I blow kisses into the wind... dreams." lovely, powerful piece. my favorite parts were “a roadmap
of burst blood vessels and sadness” and “I blow kisses
into the wind… dreams.”

]]> Comment on Clay Vessel by Cynthia http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/clay-vessel/#comment-67 Cynthia Sat, 31 May 2008 16:28:49 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=153#comment-67 I see the end of relationship, definite, but the woman doesn't want to let go, almost a visceral desire on her part. I see the end of relationship, definite, but the woman doesn’t
want to let go, almost a visceral desire on her part.

]]> Comment on Silk Weaver by Cynthia http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/silk-weaver/#comment-66 Cynthia Sat, 31 May 2008 16:26:53 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=152#comment-66 Cleanly written. I can really relate this poem. Cleanly written. I can really relate this poem.

]]> Comment on Silk Weaver by Cynthia http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/silk-weaver/#comment-65 Cynthia Sat, 31 May 2008 16:26:04 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=152#comment-65 Excellent, cleanly written. I can so relate this poem. Excellent, cleanly written. I can so relate this poem.

]]> Comment on Facere by Beth Browne http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/facere/#comment-64 Beth Browne Sat, 31 May 2008 01:09:52 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=149#comment-64 Love the ending. So hard to make a point in a poem this short. This one is outstanding. Well done! Brim is a great word. Thanks! Love the ending. So hard to make a point in a poem this short. This one is outstanding. Well done! Brim is a great word. Thanks!

]]> Comment on Afternoon Breeze by ML Kallin http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/afternoon-breeze/#comment-63 ML Kallin Fri, 30 May 2008 04:01:05 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/afternoon-breeze/#comment-63 Nice images. Thank you. Nice images. Thank you.

]]> Comment on Fold this poem in half by Beth Browne http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/fold-this-poem-in-half/#comment-62 Beth Browne Fri, 30 May 2008 01:38:28 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/fold-this-poem-in-half/#comment-62 I love the imagery and language of this poem. Thanks and keep up the good work! I love the imagery and language of this poem.

Thanks and keep up the good work!

]]> Comment on Smog by Darla Himeles http://shortpoem.org/2008/06/smog/#comment-61 Darla Himeles Fri, 23 May 2008 19:47:50 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=128#comment-61 I did some weeding, and I like the result. Thanks! I did some weeding, and I like the result. Thanks!

]]> Comment on Smog by admin http://shortpoem.org/2008/06/smog/#comment-60 admin Fri, 23 May 2008 17:00:43 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=128#comment-60 I think the poem stands on it's own, but the added definitions gave it some bonus twists and turns. I think the poem stands on it’s own, but the added definitions gave it some bonus twists and turns.

]]> Comment on Smog by Darla Himeles http://shortpoem.org/2008/06/smog/#comment-59 Darla Himeles Fri, 23 May 2008 11:21:36 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/?p=128#comment-59 I didn't mean to publish all of the definitions and further links related to the word "smog" below my poem; a Firefox extension I use put them there, and I forgot to remove them before publishing. Now that it's all live, tell me what you think, reader: should I take it down and simplify the page? Or is a fun/interesting error that adds to the experience of the poem? I didn’t mean to publish all of the definitions and further links related to the word “smog” below my poem; a Firefox extension I use put them there, and I forgot to remove them before publishing. Now that it’s all live, tell me what you think, reader: should I take it down and simplify the page? Or is a fun/interesting error that adds to the experience of the poem?

]]> Comment on Discovery by Getting Something Read « After Long Busyness: A Poetry Blog http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/discovery/#comment-58 Getting Something Read « After Long Busyness: A Poetry Blog Fri, 23 May 2008 00:48:59 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/discovery/#comment-58 [...] Something Read I have had a poem published at Getting Something Read. It’s a cool site for short [...] [...] Something Read I have had a poem published at Getting Something Read. It’s a cool site for short [...]

]]> Comment on Conversation by Sally G http://shortpoem.org/2008/05/conversation/#comment-28 Sally G Fri, 09 May 2008 11:36:01 +0000 http://shortpoem.org/2008/04/conversation/#comment-28 I really like Conversation, what a pleasure to discover this when I opened the page. Good work, Persis! I really like Conversation, what a pleasure to discover this when I opened the page. Good work, Persis!

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