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October 14, 2009 ยง Susan Dion

by Susan Dion

A ledger, in ink, 1941
an uncle’s appliance store
one Polish lady
faithfully paid
fifty cents, cash
every seven days,
never late
for twenty weeks
April thru August
all to purchase
an iron, GE brand,
with a metal-top
ironing board

nothing more.

{ 4 comments… read them below or add one }

Gay Finkelman October 14, 2009 at 6:24 pm

Susan,
Incredible what you can do with so few words. This touching story paints such huge pictures and creates scenes. You are a genius!
Gay

Lisa Hecmanczuk October 27, 2009 at 6:00 pm

Wonderful imagery. It really captures how America was decades ago. If only we could have that patience today! Instant gratification is highly overrated.

Pat Lordan November 1, 2009 at 8:31 pm

Susan,
Your amazing! Thanks for sharing.
Pat

Mark November 25, 2009 at 12:28 am

I just love the way this poem rings off like a musical cash register. It’s at once thrilling, methodical and wry. Thank you. Will be seeking out your others.

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